fixed errors in post my-wilting-mind

content/posts/my-wilting-mind/index.md

@@ -101,9 +101,9 @@ This practice gave me hope and the push I needed to keep going.
 
 Lifelong learning is crucial for maintaining mental agility and personal
 satisfaction. There are numerous ways to continue learning:
-- online courses
-- reading books
-- engaging in new hobbies.
+- Online Courses
+- Reading Books
+- Engaging in new Hobbies.
 This commitment to continuous learning helps keep the mind sharp and opens up
 new opportunities.
 
@@ -119,13 +119,13 @@ self: work harder on this part :|
 Building resilience is essential for coping with setbacks and challenges.
 Developing resilience can help view challenges as opportunities for growth
 rather than obstacles. This perspective is key for development. There are many
-aspects that make up resiliency, I have listed some of them that are important
+aspects that make up resiliency; I have listed some of them that are important
 to me.
 
 ### Build Strong Relationships
 - Seek Support: Maintain strong connections with family and friends.
 - Engage in Community: Participate in community activities
-### Improve Emotional intelligence
+### Improve Emotional Intelligence
 - Self-Awareness: Recognize and understand your emotions.
 - Emotional Regulation: Learn techniques to manage and respond to emotions effectively.
 ### Set Realistic Goals
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ to me.
 - Celebrate Progress: Acknowledge and celebrate your achievements, no matter how small.
 ### Develop Problem-Solving Skills
 - Analytical Thinking: Approach problems methodically, considering various solutions and their potential outcomes.
-- Adaptability: Be flexible and keep an open mind, not everything will work.
+- Adaptability: Be flexible and keep an open mind; not everything will work.
 ### Self-Confidence
 - Self-Efficacy: Believe in your ability to overcome challenges and succeed.
 - Past Successes: Reflect on past successes and how you overcame these challenges.
@@ -171,26 +171,21 @@ understanding emotions better and making informed decisions about your future.
 
 Continuously working to improve your professional skills is important, even if
 your current job does not provide a challenge. Networking can help you discover
-new opportunities. As well as this try to find chellenge, find areas that you
-lack experience or would like to improve on. For me this happened to be
-confidence in hosting large meatings and taking charge. Although I was not
-challenging my mind with technical problems I was still challenging myself to
-improve.
+new opportunities. Additionally, try to find challenges within your current
+role. For me, this meant gaining confidence in hosting large meetings and taking
+charge. Although I was not challenging my mind with technical problems, I was
+still challenging myself to improve.
 
 Sometimes it's all about perspective.
 
 ## Finding Purpose and Meaning
 
-Finding purpose and meaning in life gives us motivation and satisfaction.
-Taking part in activities that contribute to more than just yourself, such as
-volunteering, can provide fulfillment and a sense of purpose.
-
-One community I found to be very beneficial for me was the local hackspace.
-The hackspace is moving to a new site and still spinning up as I write this post.
-I was there, I helped put parts of the space together, I left my mark on the
-space with work I could be proud of. Volunteering gave me the feeling of
-contributing to something bigger than myself. A space that people will use
-for—hopefully—years I was able to help build. That is something I can be proud of.
+One community I found to be very beneficial for me was the local hackspace. The
+hackspace is moving to a new site and still spinning up as I write this post. I
+was there; I helped put parts of the space together. I left my mark on the space
+with work I could be proud of. Volunteering gave me the feeling of contributing
+to something bigger than myself. A space that people will use for—hopefully—years
+to come. I was able to help build something that I can be proud of.
 
 ## **Conclusion**
 
@@ -206,5 +201,5 @@ We are the captains of our ship and where we sail is our story. Take control
 and become a little bit better everyday. Society asks a lot of us but we need to
 take a step back sometimes and simply admire everything we have achieved and how
 far we have left to go. I am 22 (as of writing this post) and I have a lifetime
-ahead of me, this part of my life is simply the pebble thrown into the lake, I
+ahead of me. This part of my life is simply the pebble thrown into the lake; I
 am excited to see what the ripples look like.